You need to clearly state the conventions of digipacks before you explain how you followed them. Go back to the ppt I did in class and summarise the conventions - it is somewhere on the blog. Highlight more how you followed convention - close up shots of specific features. Then explain how you were influenced by real products. Explain in more detail why you followed some convention yet broke others (eg why did you challenge the traditional representation of females?) You have not talked about your other ancillary enough. Start by outline the conventions (ppt again and then talk about specific examples and how real examples influenced you.
You need to clearly state the conventions of digipacks before you explain how you followed them. Go back to the ppt I did in class and summarise the conventions - it is somewhere on the blog. Highlight more how you followed convention - close up shots of specific features. Then explain how you were influenced by real products.
ReplyDeleteExplain in more detail why you followed some convention yet broke others (eg why did you challenge the traditional representation of females?) You have not talked about your other ancillary enough. Start by outline the conventions (ppt again and then talk about specific examples and how real examples influenced you.